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The Love Letter by Molybdenum-Blues The Love Letter by Molybdenum-Blues

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I stumbled upon this flash fiction bit I wrote several years ago. It's an exchange between a coach and a student who has a crush on him.

I based this on a friend on mine and also on myself. I've fallen in love with countless teachers, and I thought it would be interesting to try and see things from the mind of the teacher/authority figure rather than from mine :)

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nezarzaitoni Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good job,Letter of Love!:iconmyheartplz::iconthxfav1:
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SheikTheGeek Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
Really well done! :)
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Cranberry413 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
I love this! I think any good teacher (and person in general actually) would be like Donald. I really like the realistic aspect. Nicely done :D You did a good job capturing both of their feelings, it's great.
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danvighar Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Oh yeah. While I haven't been in that situation myself, I can see it happening. And his responses - verbal, emotional, and internal thoughts - are spot on for a decent guy.
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Molybdenum-Blues Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you---it's good to know this sounds realistic :)
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cyimang Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow.. Very interesting:)
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Molybdenum-Blues Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :) Unless you meant "interesting" as a bad thing :D
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cyimang Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I meant it as a good thing my friend:) It was a very interesting read as
it showed the emotion of both the young girl and the teacher. Normally
you just see the younger ones feelings:D

And I love the last part:)
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