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Let me collect your glistening hair
In my own hands
And kiss the dewdrops from your lips
Or go swimming in your eyes
And close the lids
Then quench my thirst upon your tears

And oh...
I'm wading
Here, by the shore
The seagulls are calling
As they fly away

Your rushing voice washes me
To Paradise
You wave me to a sandy beach
The crushing volume of your words
Displaces my calm
I'm overflowing for you

And oh...
I'm drifting
Far from the shore
The salty winds blowing
As I'm borne away

How I'd like to run with you
Down to the sea
And spread out wide under the sun
Then I'd have to draw you into
The chasm of my arms
And you'd fill me with all you are

And oh...
I'm drowning
In the depths of your eyes
Is the ocean still lovely
From the inside?
This was a song I wrote about my boyfriend early on in our relationship. It took him a while to warm up to me, and I too felt some apprehension back then. I likened him to the ocean---immeasurably beautiful and fascinating, but also scary and stormy at times...and engulfing.

You can hear the song here: [link] (piano version) and [link] (acoustic guitar version)

See more of my songs in my Featured Gallery: [link]
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:iconadeliseeclair:
AdeliseEclair Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful :D
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Molybdenum-Blues Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thank you :D
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What a wonderful way to describe the ocean's depths. ^^
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:iconmolybdenum-blues:
Molybdenum-Blues Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! That's sweet of you :)
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:blush: It's ok. Come read my writings sometime. ;)
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SheikTheGeek Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012
Thats nice. :)
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:iconmolybdenum-blues:
Molybdenum-Blues Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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SheikTheGeek Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
You welcome <333
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